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QEnglish Diary - please fix my sentences?

I would appreciate if you capitalize the words that you post .

There were earthquakes in the northeast (north east ) days to Japan a few dew. Above all , followed by a huge tsunami earthquakes . I heard the news that a number of missing persons . ( I heard that some people were missing and I learned that there are a number of missing persons ) is more than 8000 people . However, it turned out that the number indicated .

I watched the news showing cars and homes in the water flowing by the tsunami . The freight wagons were drawn up by mud and water that was caused by the tsunami . There were people in the car ! I was confused if I was watching the news or watching a movie .

I also heard that a building collapsed in a nuclear plant ( destroyed ) causing residents near the plant exploded radiation. This is very dangerous . Therefore, the government told the people to stay in their homes by the government can make sure everything is okay .

Another story was a hotel near the coast collapsed and people were not able to escape the building .

I feel bad for the people who lost loved ones and who have lost their homes . The earthquake was even bigger than the earthquake that struck Haiti in 2008 . I wish the situation would be resolved soon . I also hope that no more disasters worldwide .

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#1teetee2478Answered at 2013-02-04 06:45:51
You're doing great! Remember plural and being too repetitive in his writing . Do not miss small words like "on" and " are" are very important . There were earthquakes in the northeast (north east ) Japan few days ago. On ( not 'THE' ) In addition, a huge tsunami did the same (not literal sounds , but this will make you seem more fluid ) . I heard on the news that a number of people who have disappeared , allegedly over eight thousand . However, it turned out that they were exaggerating . I watched the news showing cars and homes that flow by the tsunami . The freight wagons (not sure what you're trying to say here ) were swept away even by mud and water that was caused by the tsunami . There were people in the car ! I was confused as to whether he was watching the news or watch a movie . I also heard that a building of nuclear power plant exploded, causing residents near the plant to be at risk of of high levels of radiation , which is extremely dangerous. Therefore, the government told people to stay home so they can get the situation . Another story is that a hotel near the coast collapsed and people were not able to escape the building . I feel bad for the people who lost loved ones and homes . The earthquake was even larger than the one that struck Haiti in 2008 . I hope the situation stabilizes ( no ' d ' ) soon . I also hope that there will be no more in the world disaster . Hope this helped !
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